Question of freedom

Immigrants come to this country to get food to have freedom and have an education and a better job.

I don't think that everyone in this country don't have food because some people don't have jobs and some of them don't have food or apartments and some people treat other people like slaves and some times they kill them and people that have jobs don't get pay well to survive.

Yes I feel free in this country because i get everything i need and i have food and i live in an apartment and i have to clothes to wear everyday.

 I am sharing my thoughts and feelings about freedom because  I want this country to improve and get better.

 I that not everybody is not free in this country because some of them are in jail some are killed b y other people.

An example of limited freedom in this country is That everyone should have freedom.

One example is from the video that the mothers where pregnant and they went to jail and they couldn't take care of their babies.

An another example of limited freedom in this country is THAT NO ONE SHOULD BE TREAtED LIKE SLAVES

In some places people are in jail for nothing because they did nothing bad.

One good thing is that you can find food anywhere and you can find clothes and stuff you need.

         But this country has a lot of good things. I like this country because they have laws. I do not like this country because not everyone has freedom.

Another good thing about being in this country is that you get everything you want. 

By sharing my thoughts, I hope that everyone should get freedom will change.

Even though not everyone has freedom, those people that have opportunities can fight for the freedom of others i think that no one should take the freedom from you because you was born with that and know one can't take that from you.

FREEDOM

Not having freedom Makes you feel like a slave and makes you feel different from other people.

Not everybody has freedom because some people don't have the freedom to come to the united states.

My vision of freedom begins with my belief that every person should have an education.

I am writting this vision of freedom for the people that don't have any freedom.

Another vision of someone needs to be free is too have a a religion.

One detail os from gopi is that she has a different religion because she is a girl.

Another vision of freedom is that everyone should get food.

One example is amerigo he did not have food he did not had health care.

I think that people that don't have freedom see my vision of freedom.

I think that everyone should have freedom even thoe they are poor.

the place where you are born

Yes is true because millions of kids and parents are hungry and they die every second because they are hungry and need food to stay alive but they don't have food to live so people from around the world go to their country to give them food and clothes and things that they need.

No i can't control because i am just a kid and if i control my country they would kill me only the president can control the country and if i were a president i would save money to give it to the kids and people that no food and i will send them cans of food and also i will send them clean water so that they could drink and i will also put a school so that they could learn.

If i was one of those kids i will fill sad and hungry and thirsty

equal rights

1. have equal rights
2. have rights for jobs
3. the rights for food
4. rights for education
5. no discrimination
6. all humans are born free and equal
7. nobody should be discriminated based on race or color
8. no one shall be subjected to random arrest
9. everyone should have rights to work
10. everyone one have rights to go to the same school

1) this rights were created so people won't be fighting over the schools or what they need and that everybody could go to the same school and every body should go to the same place.

Soanar Raft

Soanar starts flying around because she was getting hotter and some one woke her up and she needed to be in a cold place. For example some one took her out of the fridge and dint put her back. The second example is that
to feed her because it was spring. Last example she needed to be in a cold place like the attic. Clearly soanar started flying around the house because she was getting hotter because she was sleeping and some one woke her up.

Juan's reading easy

The old man's problem is that he carves elephants a a young boy wants to now how to carve elephants and he wants the old man to show him. For example the young man had to wait for a year. Another example is that the young man wanted to do same elephants that the old man did. Last example is the young man learned that there was so much to know about carving stone.


The problem is resolved because the old man show him how to carve elephants and they were picking up the old man's tools to set the tiger free and he wanted to learn how to make elephants like the same elephants that the old man did and people travel around the world to see his statues
to the museum.


I think that the young man's future is going to be that he carves elephants. One example is that the old man show him how to carve elephants. Another example is that the young man ask the old man to show him how to carve. Las example is that also he wanted to carve stones. Clearly the young mans future is going to be carving stone.

Dear future president

There is a big problem facing our country. The problem is that students are throwing garbage in the schools. First, kids are throwing garbage in the class room. Second, Schools are not telling their parents. Third, thing is to tell the kids to stop throwing garbage.

Students are throwing garbage in the class room. Their parents do not care about what they are doing in the schools. The teachers are being to easy on them. We should tell them to stop throwing garbage or give them suspension. Evidently teachers don't care.

Students are not respecting the rules. They don't respect the school. They don't respect the teachers also the teachers don't care about them. We should tell them to stop throwing garbage or give them suspension. Clearly kids do not respect the schools.

Students are not recycling. They don't care. They don't respect the school. They are not recycling. Clearly nobody care about what they are doing in the schools and the principles don't care they don't give them
detention they don't do nothing almost no one cares about the enviroment.

Clearly nobody cares about what kids are doing in the schools and the principles don't care. Thank you Mr.President for spending some time reading my essay thank you so much for your consideration.

super hero

By day I was just a normal kid named Juan but at night i became the Good Things Man.Then his belt was ringing and that means that some one was misbehaving
so he went to the boy's house and saw him sleeping and then Daniel woke up and saw me and said who are you and i said I am a super hero.
Daniel said can you leave and the good things man said o.k. but tomorrow I am coming here.It was a sunny day and school was about to start and the Good Things Man heard Daniel telling his mom can you leave me alone you are so Stupid said Daniel.Daniel was wearing a blue shirt and brown shoes also black pants.


At night the good things man went back to Daniel's room and he made him had a dream and Daniel dreamed about that he was misbehaving.Then a super hero comes
and tells Daniel if you misbehave again something bad is going to happen to you and at night you will get nightmares and no body will love you even your mom
and Daniel said o.k. .The next day Daniel had a lot of friends and everybody liked him because he was so nice and always did his work and the teacher was so proud
of him then she gave him a gift.The dream takes place in the old west and it sounds quiet.The Good Things Man had blue clothes and blue armors.
The Good Things Man said I think Daniel needs to show some respect to everybody.


In the morning Daniel's mom baked him a cake because it was Saturday. Daniels mom said I am so proud of you then she bought him gift's and she
even moved to a new house.Daniel was so proud that he said thanks to the Good Things Man and the the super hero said you are
doing a great job your friends are out there go and Daniel said thanks.

My first blog post

September 19,2008

Blog Draft

Intro-Blogs:

My name is Juan Romero I go to school at C.I.S 339. My ELA teacher is Mr. Spevack. What i like the most about my ELA class is that we can learn English. We will be blogging about reading stuff.

My goals for 6 grade literacy is 2 years growth in reading and writing. My plan on accomplishing my goals are practice reading at least for 30 minutes and practice writing. Its important to get better and reading and writing because it would make your brain more smarter it would help you pass the test. The type of books i like to read are funny,scary and adventure.The book i am reading is time warp trio.In class i am writing about super hero.