Wednesday, October 29, 2008

Dear future president



There is a big problem facing our country. The problem is that students are throwing garbage in the schools. First, kids are throwing garbage in the class room. Second, Schools are not telling their parents. Third, thing is to tell the kids to stop throwing garbage.

Students are throwing garbage in the class room. Their parents do not care about what they are doing in the schools. The teachers are being to easy on them. We should tell them to stop throwing garbage or give them suspension. Evidently teachers don't care.

Students are not respecting the rules. They don't respect the school. They don't respect the teachers also the teachers don't care about them. We should tell them to stop throwing garbage or give them suspension. Clearly kids do not respect the schools.

Students are not recycling. They don't care. They don't respect the school. They are not recycling. Clearly nobody care about what they are doing in the schools and the principles don't care they don't give them
detention they don't do nothing almost no one cares about the enviroment.

Clearly nobody cares about what kids are doing in the schools and the principles don't care. Thank you Mr.President for spending some time reading my essay thank you so much for your consideration.

Wednesday, October 15, 2008

super hero


By day I was just a normal kid named Juan but at night i became the Good Things Man.Then his belt was ringing and that means that some one was misbehaving
so he went to the boy's house and saw him sleeping and then Daniel woke up and saw me and said who are you and i said I am a super hero.
Daniel said can you leave and the good things man said o.k. but tomorrow I am coming here.It was a sunny day and school was about to start and the Good Things Man heard Daniel telling his mom can you leave me alone you are so Stupid said Daniel.Daniel was wearing a blue shirt and brown shoes also black pants.


At night the good things man went back to Daniel's room and he made him had a dream and Daniel dreamed about that he was misbehaving.Then a super hero comes
and tells Daniel if you misbehave again something bad is going to happen to you and at night you will get nightmares and no body will love you even your mom
and Daniel said o.k. .The next day Daniel had a lot of friends and everybody liked him because he was so nice and always did his work and the teacher was so proud
of him then she gave him a gift.The dream takes place in the old west and it sounds quiet.The Good Things Man had blue clothes and blue armors.
The Good Things Man said I think Daniel needs to show some respect to everybody.



In the morning Daniel's mom baked him a cake because it was Saturday. Daniels mom said I am so proud of you then she bought him gift's and she
even moved to a new house.Daniel was so proud that he said thanks to the Good Things Man and the the super hero said you are
doing a great job your friends are out there go and Daniel said thanks.